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You've Won
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You play your game
And that's just fine
But when I say you've won
Darling just know I'm done
You made your stance clear
Not even just once or twice
And though not obligated
I'll still be nice
But don't expect
Me to wait for your call
When back to me
You start to crawl
Because for three months
That's been the case
I gave it a fair shot
But I want a change of pace
So play your game
It bothers me none
I stopped playing
Congrats, you've won
P. Payne
May 16, 2017
And that's just fine
But when I say you've won
Darling just know I'm done
You made your stance clear
Not even just once or twice
And though not obligated
I'll still be nice
But don't expect
Me to wait for your call
When back to me
You start to crawl
Because for three months
That's been the case
I gave it a fair shot
But I want a change of pace
So play your game
It bothers me none
I stopped playing
Congrats, you've won
P. Payne
May 16, 2017
It was fun for a while.
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The last two stanzas are the most that stood out to me. Probably because this is exactly how I felt a few weeks ago when I gave up a friend. As always, lovely poetry! I can hear the emotion very clearly in this piece. Keep up the good work. : )